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Smokestripe

Updated: Apr 18, 2020


Smokestripe | Male | Warrior | 17 Moons

"How c-c-can y-you say I'm st-stro-strong when I g-got this scar b-by being a coward?"


Thought The Fresh Air Would Pick Me Up, Up, Up and Away


↳ Prefix meaning;; Smoke | After his dark, smokey colored pelt

↳ Suffix meaning;; Stripe | His unique pelt, and specifically requested to be after his father Bramblingstripe

↳ Previous names;; Smokekit, Smokepaw

↳ Nicknames;; Smoke, Smokey, Son, Kid, Little Lion


Gender;; DMAB Male

↳ Pronouns;; He/Him

↳Voice Claim;; Pain ; Hercules (ex. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MYhSYF51dfE )


Age;; 17 Moons

↳ Birth season;; Greenleaf


Clan;; RidgeClan

↳ Rank;; Warrior

↳ Mentor;; Reedheart, Ashstep

↳ Apprentice;; <


Maybe I'd See a Familiar Face on my Way


Adult Skills;;

⚫ fighting: ⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪

⚫ hunting: ⚫⚫⚫⚫⚪

⚫ healing: ⚫⚪⚪⚪⚪

⚫ stealth: ⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪

⚫ speed: ⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪


Summary;; Smokestrope is a broad shouldered runt, to say the least. Out of all of Irissong's kits he already seems to be set up to have his father's broad and intimidating build with his mother's stubby legs. He has long, thick, easily tangled fur and his big paws cause him to trip all over the place. He's quite thin, even with his muscle.


↳ Fur;; Long, thick and wirey.

↳ Build;; Broad, slim and stout.

↳ Scent;; Lavender and milk

↳ Scars;; <


notable features;; soft, rounded features


I Saw a Girl in my Dreams


✔| Dedicated | Earnest | Perceptive | Genuine

=| Anxious | Family-oriented | Forgiving | Absentminded

✖| Gullible | Self-Conscious | Cowardly | Begrudging

Smokestripe honestly hasnt grown into much of a different cat than what he was like during his kithood in the way of personality or height. He's probably become more independent, but his height was throughout his apprenticeship with Flowerpaw and Russetpaw. With both of them gone, he's left with his broken family and Fernleap, who he confides and finds comfort in. He's still the same anxious, absentminded, quiet background character he was since kithood, and honestly he's perfectly fine with that outcome.


↳ likes;; Interaction, understanding his clanmates, watching the clan

↳ dislikes;; Knowing someone has a problem, The fact his elder siblings refuse to see Irissong and Bramblingstripe as their parents

↳ fears;; Not being a good warrior, letting his family down, seeing Irissong or Bramblingstripe cry, finding Flowerpaw's body


↳ habits;;

trips over his paws a lot

has a baby stutter

Hides his muzzle in his chest fur whenever he can

His whiskers twitch when hes excited

His tail is almost always underneath his butt. Happens to sit on it a lot

Chews his claws


↳ Extras Favorite;;

Food | Snake

Season | Green-Leaf

Smell | Irissong's scent

Sound | Birds chirping in the morning

Place | His nice, soft, safe nest

Cat | Tie between Bramblingstripe and Irissong


I Don't Remember Her Name


Irissong | Mother | linfliights | Queen/Warrior

Bramblingstripe | Father | Tearabil | Warrior


Coalpath | Brother | NPC | Missing

Gorseflower | Brother | aleskay | Warrior

Lilacpaw | Brother | Summer-Starz | Deceased

Sparkcry | Brother | daw-nn | Warrior

Thunderpaw | Brother | NPC | Missing

Brackenthorn | Sister | MossyRiver | Warrior

Brightwing | Sister | NPC | Warrior

Bushhop | Sister | ARCommando | Warrior

Hailpaw | Sister | NPC | Missing

Thornbreeze | Sister | o0CherrySplash0o | Warrior

Timberskip | Sister | Danfoddil | Warrior

Wasppaw | Sister | NPC | Missing


Flowerpaw | Sister | Wrenili | Missing

Russetkit | Brother | Xashur | Deceased


offspring: >


sexual orientation: Heterosexual

↳ status;; Single

↳ current attractions;; Fernleap

↳ past attractions;; N/A


turn ons | LOCKED

turn offs | LOCKED


I Guess it's Just Another One of Those Days



Where I'm Missing Everything

History;; Before birth:

➢Bramblingstripe had had a crush on Irissong since he was a kit and it was only a matter of time before his baby crush developed into... Something more. After their separation of GroveClan, RidgeClanners had started to settle down. It took a bit longer than expected, but eventually Bramblingstripe courted Irissong into being his mate. Quickly after that, they had their first litter... Then eventually their second. The couple faced hardships and tried to comfort each other as they started to age, when an unexpected third litter came along. Having learned from their past three, when Irissong fell sick and was told she was expecting her fourth litter, Bramblingstripe and Irissong vowed to not mess up this time, parenting them. They'd learned... Soon enough, three beautiful kits came into the world in Greenleaf. Kithood: ➢ Born to Irissong and Bramblingstripe in their fourth and final litter before retirement. He is the smallest, with Flowerkit and Russetkit born as his littermates.

➢ Always being teased by his brother for being the smallest and being pushed around, gratefully, Irissong had his back.

➢ Besides his brother's teasing, Smokekit found himself wriggling around beneath Brackenpaw's paws, bothering her and bugging her without noting how much of a pain he was to her. Basically, Smokekit was raised by her along with his parents.

➢ Suddenly, Brackenpaw and Irissong alike both hid from him and his other littermates in a similar fashion to each other. Scared he'd done something wrong, Smokekit asks his father what happened, only to hear one of his elder siblings, Lilacpaw, Brackenpaw's littermare, had passed mysteriously.

➢ Concerned, Smokekit tries to comfort his family, but fucks up because he's baby...

➢ Watches Brackenpaw become Brackenthorn.

➢ Soon afterwards, Smokepaw and his littermates are announced apprentices. Apprenticeship:

➢ Smokekit becomes Smokepaw, given Reedheart as his mentor.

➢ Noting that both his mentor and mother were trained by Nettlestar, Smokepaw felt a wave come over him- noting its another reason he has to be tough and a good warrior, which makes his anxiety grow worse.

➢ After his first couple moons of training, Smokepaw starts to feel comfortable around Reedheart, and confides in him about his worries with not being strong enough. Reedheart is receptive, and tells him that hes shaping up to be a good warrior, so he should focus on that rather than his worries.

➢ once returning from camp, Nettlestar announces he and his littermates will be going to the gathering! At the gathering he does nothing but worry to Brackenthorn and Flowerpaw about whether GroveClan was gonna eat them. Warriorhood:

✔ Notes (can be slow) ✔ Discord ✘ Skype ✔ Comments (can be slow) ✔ Google Docs ✘ Email


Roleplay example;;

LIT :: Mapleblaze couldn't help her gaze shift to him, finding herself leaning towards him to comfort the tom as he thought. Home. What even was it? GroveClan was the only home the dappled she-cat knew. But it felt so empty now that Bluetuft and Bramblingstripe.. And Irissong... All the cats she would consider friends prior to the war. She sighed, listening to him speak. "If not GroveClan, I'd have no home..." She murmured, blinking up at the tom. StarClan knows she misses some cats. But then there were cats like Nettlestar. Mapleblaze's tail wrapped around herself tightly, ears lowering. What in StarClan's name even was home anymore. Whats home without... Friends.. Or family. She couldnt help feel her heart sink, swelling with something she could only name as shame. Her eyes only narrowed as Aspencry spoke again. Where I belong anymore. She didnt know either, to be fair. Biting down viciously on her bottom lip, she raised her gaze to the sky; peering through the cracks in the leaves to watch the warriors of silverpelt look down at her.. Or maybe look down on Aspencry.. What would she have done to earn the gaze of StarClan upon her pelt? Despite how much she wanted to continue on that path, she pondered the younger tom's words. "StarClan knows I understand..." She murmured quietly, meeting his gaze. "But the future holds something in its paws for everyone... Cats break away, friendships are lost..." She paused, blinking back up at the sky. "Cats die." She choked, clearing her throat and turning to Aspencry once again as he spoke. Wasnt the will of StarClan.. Her ears twitched, piquing her interest. "Its possible." She murmured, blinking at the tom, her mind traveling down this path. It'd make sense... "For the place of no stars to make something... Like her..." She murmured, pursing her lips in thought, letting her eyes drift closed. Nettlestar... She felt her jaw tighten, before her eyes opened at his following question. *How do we stop someone like that?" "I dont know..." She murmured honesty, shifting her weight from one paw to the other uncomfortably. "But if StarClan was on our side... They should have a solution..." she turned to him, flicking an ear. "Dont you think so?"

SCRIPT :: Thunderkit: She found herself waddling from the nursery, kicking at the grass below her paws as she had her maw open, dragging her tongue across the two teeth that poked from her mouth at all times. How had she JUST noticed this? Well, does it matter? It was the only thing she could think about right now. How weird her teeth were. They were so cool. Though this funny train of thought stopped short as a somewhat familiar voice yelled something. She whipped around, her confused gaze coming to Peachpaw. She padded towards the calico, giving her shoulder a casual push. "Hey Peeeeeeeachpaw" She greeted, taking a moment to actually remember and say the apprentices name.

"aa,,,aaAAAAAA"


↳ Smokekit wants to be just like his parents; respected, honorable warriors! He just... doesn't know how to get there. He nearly starts crying whenever he trips over a paw or acts too kind to someone because, as he would put it, "fearsome warriors don't be kind!" He idolizes his father in particular, often confiding in his mother about how much he wants to be just like him. If someone told him that he was just like his father when he was a kit, Smokekit would vigorously shake his head and proclaim that his father was always so cool and collected!

Where I'm Missing Everything

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